Friday, July 22, 2016

When Hearts Meet


Book Series: Stand Alone Title (Sequel to Where the Heart Leads)
Publishing Date: 2001
Author: Anita Stansfield
Publisher: Covenant Communications, Inc.
Category: LDS Historical Romance
Point of View: Third Person Limited: Ethan and Sara
Chapter Count: 8
Page Count: 130

To all the good members of the Oklahoma Tulsa Mission who are taking such good care of Elder Stansfield. Thank you. (That would be John, her oldest, because her next oldest son, Jake, served his mission [With my youngest brother!] in the England London South mission sometime during 2004-2007.) 

Chapter 1      Coming Home
Sterling, Utah-1902

After Ethan Caldwell lost his pregnant wife who died in his arms on the kitchen floor along with the unborn child due to hemorrhaging from early labor complications, he distanced himself from his Mormon religion and turned to drinking to deal with his grief. That's how he lost his house and property which Jon and Maddie bought as Ethan discovers as he rides up on his horse, determined to make peace with his past by paying one last visit to his old home where he was once so happy. He's back in the church and hasn't fallen off the wagon in months.
Since the last book, Maddie and Jon Brandt have two children with another on the way. Dr. Brandt continues to serve the community and work at home with his own clinical wing plus separate upstairs guest rooms to accommodate any overnight patients and their family members (or Ethan). Jon and Maddie are happy to meet Ethan and immediately take him in.
Ethan tells his story: at age fifteen, he was migrating west from Arkansas when he reached Utah, fell ill, and was taken in by a nice elderly woman who shared the gospel with him. He later married then lost his wife in this very kitchen. Jon and Maddie sympathize. 
Jon just happened to break his ankle so he's not much good around the house and barn. Ethan just happens to need a place to stay and a job. Problem solved.

Chapter 2      Running West

Four days later, a telegram arrives from Boston. Jon's brother-in-law, Harrison Hartford, died rather tragically and unexpectedly leaving his sister, Sara, a widow and her five-year-old son, Phillip, fatherless and alone.
Maddie and her son and daughter take this news very hard, bursting into tears in front of the two men. Maddie has to leave the room, she's that upset. Jon follows her. 
Ethan gathers the two weepy children to him and gives them a little (condescending) talk about dealing with loss and grief, suggesting they write letters (with dad's help) to send to their cousin expressing their sympathies.
Thousands of miles away, in Boston, Sara opens the letter from her brother inviting her to come to Utah so they can all mourn this tragedy together. Since Sara was falling out of love with her emotionally distant, controlling husband anyway, she sees no reason to remain in Boston. Might as well take Jon up on his offer for a permanent visit. Mona, Sara's faithful house servant, starts packing for the big move. She shows Sara a paper she found hidden in the china closet. It would appear her late husband's business dealings weren't entirely legal. Bad men were most likely behind his "suspicious" death. Sara decides she'll think about it later.
Sara sells the family home and settles all her late husband's accounts with their attorney, Geoffrey, who tells Sara she's nuts. 
Taking precautions, Sara sends a message to a private detective, Mr. Saunders, informing him of the entire situation, including the paper Mona found. Mona and Sara continue getting everything ready for the journey. Mona will come too. Oh, and Sara is pregnant.
 A few days later, Sara, Mona and Phillip board the train west.
A reluctant Ethan agreed to pick up Sara at the depot. He is immediately struck dumb by the lovely, young widow's poise, beauty and intelligence. 

Chapter 3      The Distinguished Mrs. Hartford

Sara and her party are comfortably settled in the extra rooms in the family residence on the opposite side of the house from Ethan's room (because we can't have any hanky-panky going on in an LDS novel!). Mona immediately takes over all the cooking and housekeeping duties because Maddie got sick and she's about to pop any day. Ethan helps supervise the children. Jon is still laid up with his bum foot. Sara is grateful for this opportunity to "find herself" she's also unsure about Ethan, an unlearned man who never learned to read or write beyond his own name. That don't impress her much. Ethan's feelings are hurt by Sara's patronizing behavior towards him. Nevertheless, he REALLY likes Sara.
Maddie and Jon reassure Sara, for an Arkansas redneck, Ethan is trustworthy. Besides, the children love him.

Chapter 4     Something in Common

As the chapter title implies, Ethan and Sara discover they have something in common: both think Sara is being a witch. Sara feels bad for giving Ethan such a hard time about his illiteracy and offers to tutor him. Ethan will consider it. They also have a nice chat about the difficulty in losing a spouse.
Maddie has the baby. A girl. Sara finds herself thinking more about Ethan and what a good man he is. He knows she wasn't close to her husband and Sara cries when Ethan tells her the tragic story of how his wife died.
For two weeks, Ethan struggles to get thoughts of Sara out of his head. He even prays about it before realizing the Lord WANTS him to get together with this amazing widow. Ethan's thoughts are so disturbing to him, he stays in the barn until Sara is sent to fetch him for dinner. Ethan won't come. Jon hobbles out to talk to him.

Chapter 5       Fire and Ice (A dream won't come true. Storms are brewing in your eyes, Sara!)

Still hiding in the barn, Ethan can't stand it any longer. He tells Jon about his feelings for Sara. They come from different worlds. It would never work. He's not worthy of her. Jon tells Ethan he's an idiot because he should be telling all this to Sara, not him.
The following Sunday, Sara decides she's feeling up to attending her first Mormon worship service and ends up enjoying it. Later, Sara and Ethan sit down with a copy of "The Book of Mormon" for Ethan's first reading lesson. Sara listens, patiently correcting him, as he reads aloud from the very first chapter. They pause often to discuss it. Cue the romantic attraction!
Ethan whines to Jon (again) about his fears of "marrying up" since Sara comes from a higher socioeconomic class, it's SO obvious they can never be together. Jon tells him to go for it anyway.

Chapter 6      Fools Together

December is here with snow and cold temps. Ethan is hitching up the horses for a trip to town. Sara, dressed in warm clothing, requests to come along as a cure for her cabin fever. They have another nice chat during the drive; getting to know each other better.
Back home, Sara watches Ethan care for the horses and nearly swoons over how masculine Ethan is! Sara realizes she completely misjudged this man. Before she can apologize any further, Ethan steps over and kisses her. Sara responds. Both agree they are fools. Fools in love!
A threatening telegram arrives for Sara, the bad men who killed her husband are coming for what is rightfully theirs. Sara tells Jon, Maddie and Ethan everything. Still upset, Sara stands up too fast from the kitchen table and collapses. Ethan catches her and carries her upstairs to bed.
Sara is okay. She even joins the rest of the family for dinner. She's grateful to Ethan for his moral support during this time of trial. Sara declines joining them all for family scripture study and goes to bed early.

Chapter 7      Water

Ethan follows her upstairs. He can't wait any longer to declare his feelings to Sara, get down on one knee and propose marriage. By accepting his offer and taking his name, Sara (and her pile of money) would be protected from those bad men. He promises Sara the money would always be hers, he wouldn't claim it, even if it is within his legal right.
Sara breaks down, sobbing in his arms. They sit on the floor for a long time until Sara's tears are finally spent and she can calmly and rationally agree to marry him. She declares after they are wed, there won't by any "his" and "hers" it will all be "ours" including Sara's unborn child. They kiss. It's so passionate, Ethan's fire melted Sara's ice to become cool, cleansing, water.
Sara finds Ethan in the barn the next day. They make out some more before remembering they need to go inside together to tell Jon and Maddie their happy news.
The wedding will be held the very next day. Sara even shampoos her hair for the occasion. She must really love him.
Phillip is glad Ethan will be his new papa. The bishop and his wife arrive. Aunt Ellie (see the last book) her husband and kids and Maddie's parents arrive to observe the ceremony. Sara wears Maddie's white temple dress with flowers in her dark hair. No one has any objections why these two should not be legally and lawfully wed.
There's a wedding supper afterwards before Ethan and Sara take the stairs to Sara's bedroom, now the honeymoon suite.
They remain in bed for a good part of the next day.

Chapter 8      Where Hearts Meet 

Ethan has already made arrangements to use part of Sara's money to purchase a lot and build a home. Sara loves the idea and can't wait for the baby to be born so they can begin their new life together as a new family.
The following Sunday, everyone just returned from church when a visitor arrives from Boston. It's Mr. Saunders, the private detective Sara contacted before she left. He did some investigating and is here to warn Sara the man responsible for Harrison's death might make his move today. Jon and Maddie insist Mr. Saunders stay for Sunday dinner.
They're just finishing up when Sara's attorney from Boston, Geoffrey Warren, comes knocking. He and Saunders took the same train. They joke about the coincidence of ending up here. Conversation turns to Sara's late husband when Saunders abruptly excuses himself.
Geoffery asks to speak privately with Sara who leads him into the parlor. Ethan tags along as a silent observer. The bad men most likely responsible for her late husband's death contacted Geoffery, demanding the money. His legal advice to Sara is to just hand over the amount they're demanding. That way nobody gets hurt.
Sara is appalled. What kind of lame attorney travels all the way from Boston without any legal documents that will hold up in court to back up his own crazy advice? There's something suspicious about all of this. 
Sara smiles and plays her trump card: she can't hand over any money. There is no money! Sara Hartford, wealthy widow, no longer exists. At this point, Ethan steps in and puts his arm around Sara. May we introduce Mrs. Ethan Caldwell, who can no longer claim her late husband's money.
Geoffery turns red with anger. Realizing he's beat, he picks up his briefcase and exits the house in a huff.
Mr. Saunders surprises them with his presence; snuck in by way of the back door and overheard everything. Turns out, Harrison got involved in the opium trade, lost all his money and was murdered by none other than his own attorney, Geoffery Warren, hoping to cash in on the scheme to rob Sara for the debts owing. Saunders already alerted the police who will apprehend the naughty attorney before he can escape on the next train East. Everyone is grateful to Saunders for clearing up this whole mess.
Three days after Christmas, Sara goes into labor. The baby girl (Hannah) is born with little difficulty but complications arise while Sara is struggling to deliver the afterbirth. She moans and faints. Experiencing déjà vu,  Ethan starts to freak out. He's losing his first wife all over again! Jon orders Ethan out. Holding his new daughter, Ethan allows Maddie to guide him into another room where he breaks down. Maddie gives him a pep talk and the "all clear" is sounded. Sara is out of danger. She's alive and everything is going to be okay from now on.

Epilogue     

Sterling, Utah-1906 
Four years later, Mona keeps house in Ethan and Sara's new home. Sara joined the church. Ethan baptized her, of course. They got sealed in the temple just before the twins were born. That was two years ago. Phillip helps Ethan with the chores while three-year-old Hannah chases after her twin brothers. Ethan herds the children into the kitchen where he comes up behind Sara at the stove and kisses her on the neck. She scolds him before Ethan takes the little ones into the other room to read them a story.
And they all lived happily ever after.


THE END




Sunday, July 10, 2016

Where The Heart Leads



Book Series: Stand Alone Title 
Publishing Date: 2001
Author: Anita Stansfield
Publisher: Covenant Communications, Inc.
Category: LDS Historical Romance
Point of View: Third Person Limited: Jon and Maddie
Chapter Count: 13
Page Count: 246

This book is dedicated to all the men who have faithfully read my stories, diligently putting up with being harassed about reading romance novels. Your wives and girlfriends love you for it. And so do I.
This one's for you.  (Spare us, Anita. Only four more years till Twilight) 

Prologue   
Boston-1894

Meet Jonathon Brandt and his younger sister Sara both keeping vigil at the bedside of their dying mother. Jonathon's father is a very successful doctor with a busy practice. While nobody doubts Phillip Brandt's love and devotion to his wife and family, Jon is just a little put out with his father right now-Mom's dying while Dad's rushing off to spend more time at the office! Phillip reminds his son of his own chosen path in becoming a doctor. Jon resents this because his emotionally distant, domineering father practically forced him into this profession.
Carol Brandt's last words to her son is to make peace with his father.

Chapter 1        Running West

The funeral is over and Jonathon wastes no time packing. He's outta here! Sara pleads with him to stay, keep his promise to mother and reconcile with his father but Jon's not having it. He's taking the next train west. Maybe he'll stop and visit father's sister, Aunt Ellie, who married a Mormon, converted and moved to Sterling, Utah (a small town just south of Manti) when they were just kids.
Jon is impressed with the scenery in Sterling. They don't have mountains like this in Boston. A friendly neighbor offers Jon a ride from the train depot to his destination (everybody knows everybody here). On the way, Jon is given his first lesson in Mormon Community 101-no smoking, drinking, chewing tobacco, swearing or loose women to be found among the people here. Jon flicks ash from his second cigarette and shrugs, accepting everything without taking offense. These Mormons sure are a strange lot.
Jon is dropped off at the end of a long dirt road leading to two farmhouses. Not sure which one is Aunt Ellie's, he knocks at the first house where piano music drifts out through the screen door. A young, feminine voice invites him in, assuming he's Ellie, telling him to leave the plums on the kitchen table.  
The young woman seated at the piano in the parlor has wavy blonde hair and green eyes who laughs at the misunderstanding. She is Maddie Jo Hansen, short for Madeline Josephine (and every time she laughs or giggles, the reader should take a drink) and Jon is immediately smitten with her.
Ellie comes knocking and enters the house, just as Maddie predicted. Still seated at the piano, Maddie giggles like a a nitwit while Ellie tries to guess why Jon looks so familiar until Jon reminds her of a Boston family tradition and she recognizes her nephew, all grown up. Of course Jon will be staying at her house with her husband and two boys. The oldest is off at college so Jon can take his room. So far, this visit is indeterminate but now that Jon has met Maddie, he might just end up staying here the rest of his life. They leave the house; Maddie resumes playing.

Chapter 2        Plums and Frogs

Maddie is infatuated with the new single man in town. Except, with his Eau de Cigarette aroma, he's obviously not a member of the church. Sitting at the kitchen table, helping with the plums, she confides her feelings to her mother who reminds Maddie of her "condition" advising she tell Jonathon Brandt the truth before it goes any further but Maddie will never tell.
At the Jensen home, Jon is invited to join family prayer and scripture study that night with David, Aunt Eleanor and their two boys. He's further inducted into Utah culture with stories from The Book of Mormon. He goes outside for one last cigarette while the family goes to bed. Ellie invites him to come with her tomorrow to the Hansen home to help with the plum harvest. Eager to see Maddie again, Jon agrees. Ellie teases Jon about having feelings for Maddie. Jon feigns a frog in his throat prevents him from answering.
Seated at the kitchen table with Maddie, Jon spends the entire morning and most of the afternoon helping cut and pit the fruit. For some strange reason, Jon finds Maddie's constant tendency to laugh at everything endearing! He thoroughly enjoys discussing her Mormon religion with her and is impressed by Maddie's spiritual devotion. 
By mid afternoon, the women suggest Jon go out and help the men in the fields. Leaving Maddie at the table, (where she hasn't moved since his arrival) Jon stands up, his request to call on Maddie tomorrow morning accepted and takes his leave but when Jon reaches the field, he's as confused as the men, who appreciate his offer to help, but don't need him. He questions Aunt Ellie that night. Were they trying to get rid of him this afternoon? Is Maddie and her family hiding something? Ellie won't tell him anything.
Next morning, Jon finds Maddie seated on the porch swing. He joins her and they talk comfortably as if they've known each other all their lives. Jon tells her he'd like to take her out tomorrow on an official date, a picnic perhaps? Maddie looks uncomfortable but insists his gentile status, even his smoking habit, has nothing to do with her hesitation. She could see herself happily married to him, the attraction is there, but she just can't go out with him and refuses to explain why. He's welcome to call on her tomorrow, of course. Jon stands up and walks back to Aunt Ellie's. He can't help but notice Maddie never moves from the swing. 

Chapter 3       The Truth About Maddie Hansen

As if we haven't already guessed by now (For a doctor, Jon, you're an idiot!) the truth about Maddie Hansen's condition is...she can't walk! This is revealed when Jon calls on Maddie the following morning, as promised, to find her sitting on the parlor sofa, all dressed up with nowhere to go. He sits next to her and has to practically force it out of her, plead with her to open up, talk to him!
Maddie starts to cry because her first beau, after learning about her "condition" was quick to dump her and move on. She fears Jon will do the same but Jon insists he's different. Besides, he's a doctor so why would he be uncomfortable talking about her physical condition? Even if she can't work beside him in a field, stand over a stove or conceive and bear children, he still thinks she's the most incredible, the most beautiful, woman he's ever met. Maddie laughs (again) in relief this little issue is all cleared up and agrees to let him take her out tomorrow on a picnic.
There's a hint of autumn in the air when Jon arrives to pick Maddie up who is sitting in a wheelchair on the porch, expectantly waiting for him. Scooping her up easily, he carries her to the buckboard with the packed hamper in the back (thanks Aunt Ellie!) and they're on their way. Maddie obviously doesn't get out much as she finds delight in everything they pass. He lets her offer a blessing on their picnic and they dive in. Jon inquires how she came to be handicapped. Maddie tells him she wasn't born with the problem she fell off the roof trying to retrieve her doll she fell out of a tree when she was a child. (She LAUGHS at the memory.) Her parents took her to a doctor in Salt Lake who prescribed three months of bed rest. If she could get up and walk after that, a miracle, she's cured! If not...well there was nothing to be done, she was crippled for life and would never walk again. (Wow, what a smart doctor.) Jon notices Maddie scratching her leg. She has feeling in her legs! She's not paralyzed. A few questions about her bodily functions, Maddie blushes furiously when he asks her if she menstruates regularly. She does and, no, she doesn't wear Depends, she can get herself in and out of her wheelchair to use the commode with little trouble. She just can't walk. That doctor told her so and Maddie and her parents, believed him. Jon tells her, as a physician, he sees no reason why she can't conceive and physically bear children, maybe even walk one day. They could have a family and live a normal life. Realizing Jon is proposing marriage, Maddie bursts into tears. If he is asking for her hand, the answer is YES! Jon kisses her. Guess that answers that question.

Chapter 4       The Chasm

Already a golden convert, Jon knows he'll have to join the Mormon faith but Maddie insists he not join for her. He needs to find out for himself if her religion is true. Jon has already been reading The Book of Mormon (He also likes to smoke while he reads. What a strange man.) and Aunt Ellie even gave him a copy of The Doctrine and Covenants. He promises to read, pray and ponder on all the new doctrine he's learning. Even if he never converts, Jon already knows he's a better man for having met Maddie Jo Hansen.
Jon is eager to attend his first Sunday Mormon church service but, to his great disappointment, Maddie is not there. As Maddie's parents take their seats, alone, Ellie leans over and whispers to Jon that ever since the accident, they stopped bringing Maddie to church; afraid of how people would treat her or that she might contract some life threatening illness due to her delicate condition. Jon thinks that's the stupidest thing he's ever heard. Hypocrites! Nevertheless, the idea of marriage to Maddie fills him with indescribable joy.
As the weeks pass, several single women in the community begin competing for Jon's attentions but Jon only has eyes for Maddie. He gently rebuffs all their efforts and continues to attend church. Some members treat him with disdain, because he reeks of cigarettes, while others are welcoming and friendly. Jon just wants to get married to the woman he loves, buy a farm and settle here. 
One day, Jon has the opportunity to go to Manti with one of Ellie's sons where he sees the beautiful temple edifice, looking like a castle, up on yonder hill. The son explains why temples are so important and Jon feels a great desire to go inside one day and learn more about eternal families. He absolutely LOVES the idea.
Jon and Maddie are more in love than ever but there's just one little problem. Maddie's parents, her father especially, don't approve of Jon and Maddie's courtship and Maddie won't go against her parents' wishes. It's like a great chasm dividing them. 
One day, Jon notices Maddie's parents leaving the house in the buckboard. Alone. Which means Maddie is home all by herself and he can call on her. He walks in to find her at the piano. She laughs and places a hand on her heart as he rushes to take her in his arms, kiss her and promise to carry her away from here, take her to the temple so they can be married and he will treat her like a queen for the rest of her life because, as the scriptures say, a man should leave his father and mother and cleave to none other than his wife (or in Maddie's case, her husband). Maddie is ecstatic.

Chapter 5-    The Reluctant Doctor Brandt

It is now November. Jon feels right at home with Aunt Ellie's family and the rest of this rural community. He uses some of his Boston wealth to pay off Uncle Dave's account at the general store, discreetly of course. Many winter evenings are spent around the fireplace, studying the scriptures, and having deep religious discussions with the family. Jon's testimony is growing. There is no question about it. He can feel it.
When Dave contracts a bad case of pneumonia, Jon uses his medical knowledge to speed his recovery and keep him properly quarantined. Then one of the sons has an accident in the barn, nearly loosing his hand, if Jon hadn't been there to stitch it up. Word quickly spreads there's a doctor in the community and people start knocking, requesting Jon's services. Jon is embarrassed, Sara insisted he bring his medical bag but he never intended to use it while Aunt Ellie encourages him to accept his calling in life. These people need him. He treats a child's injury and is proclaimed a hero, especially when he refuses to take any money. Aunt Ellie is very proud. Jon declares he's rather be a farmer, like all the other men, albeit a farmer who smokes.
The child's health suddenly takes a turn for the worst and Jon is sent for. Other men accompany him so they can give the little girl a priesthood blessing. Jon feels the power in the room and is overwhelmed by the spirit. This is no ordinary religion. Jon believes! He immediately throws away his cigarettes. He's quitting, cold turkey and wants to be baptized ASAP. (Good luck with that, Jon. As any return missionary will tell you, a convert who can give up smoking, just like that, is very rare.) Two weeks before Christmas, Jon is baptized.

Chapter 6       Hope

Now that Jon's a Mormon, he can get back to pursuing Maddie. He believes Maddie is only suffering from muscle atrophy. With a little physical therapy, it's very possible she can walk again. He tells Ellie who tells him to go visit the Hansens. Jon does, but his meeting with Glen and Sylvia Hansen (Maddie is upstairs, missing the whole thing) does not go well. Glen doesn't believe the word of some uppity Easterner. His daughter needs special care and protection. Jon tells him his daughter is not a worthless cripple who will never make a good wife or mother just because she can't walk or have children. On the contrary, he believes she can do all that and more. If they were married, he could help Maddie with the intimate physical therapy she needs. Glen screams at Jon to get out of his house. 
But they have an ally in Syliva. Two days later, she comes to the house to inform Jon her husband is out of town for the next few days on business. Maddie is home alone and if Jon just happens to drop by, nobody would know.
Jon and Maddie make out in the parlor, renewing their promises to each other-Jon to have patience with Maddie who needs to find the courage to stand up to her father and delcare her right to be happy by accepting Jon's marriage proposal.
A few days later, Jon enters, unexpectedly, one morning to pick up Maddie. Literally. After carrying her outside, wrapped in a blanket against the winter chill to the waiting buckboard, he drives her down the road to the empty house both noticed on their first date. Jon bought the property and intends to make it their "Dovecote" after they get married. There's even a spare room for their future baby. Jon presents her with a lovely gold, heart shaped pendant for her to wear under her clothes as part of their "secret engagement." Maddie laughs and cries. 

Chapter 7     Refiner's Fire

Maddie's father returns from his trip laden with gifts for his only daughter. Maddie is grateful but she wants the kinds of things his money can't buy-temple marriage to a good man, an eternal family of her own. Jonathon Brandt is offering all that to her but her father won't hear it. Glen is adamant. He knows what's best for his daughter and this relationship is never going to happen.
Maddie goes to bed and cries herself to sleep.
Through spring and summer, Jon hires people to fix up his new home while continuing his unofficial medical practice, reluctantly accepting food and other payments from his grateful patients. He'd rather be working his own land and married to Maddie!
One Sunday, Jon is sitting in church when he feels a strong prompting to get up and leave. Maddie! Just then, Maddie's mother jumps up and bolts from the chapel. Jon follows and everything is made clear. The Hansen house is on fire! Jon runs in and carries Maddie out. He and Sylivia put out the fire which started in the kitchen, the only room damaged. Maddie is okay. She is coughing in Jon's arms when Glen pulls up. 
Dismissing his blackened home and distressed daughter, he marches over and is about to lay into Jon when Jon gets up and punches Glen before he can start yelling. Jon does the yelling instead. His daughter nearly died! If Maddie had been in church with her family, this never would've happened. He calls Glen an overprotective jerk whose smothering of Maddie boarders on abuse. Jon is taking Maddie home with him for medical observation. She'll be staying with his Aunt Ellie until the house is repaired.
Maddie is shocked at Jon's outburst and behavior. He hit her father! Jon begins packing as soon as they get home. Knowing it wouldn't be appropriate for him to stay here, Jon will be taking up residence in his new home down the road. He'll visit Maddie everyday, of course.
To show there's no hard feelings, Jon slips money to one of the carpenters, making him promise to use it in rebuilding the Hansen home; a project the entire community has undertaken.
Weeks pass. The Hansen home is back to normal and the bishop has told Jon whenever he's ready, he can go to the temple. (How can that be possible? Not even a year since Jon's baptism!) Jon is ready but Maddie won't go against her father by accepting Jon's marriage proposal. She's very sorry. Jon is ready to tear his hair out. Maddie slips into a deep depression, refusing to leave her bed and barely eating. She's wasting away. Sylvia begs Jon to come examine her. Glen Hansen enters the bedroom and, once again, orders Jon to get out of his house.

Chapter 8     Light

As requested, Jon leaves the house, banging the door behind him. Maddie weeps silent tears as she hears her parents arguing over the issue. Sylivia is on her side and comes into Maddie's room to encourage her to fast, pray and read her scriptures so she can make a final decision. She owes it to Jon.
A few days later, Jon is summoned to the Hansen home where Maddie, wearing a red dress, tells Jon to get down on one knee. She's ready to offically accept his proposal of marriage. (Glen is not home, by the way. Another business trip.)
Jon puts Maddie on his horse and mounts behind her so they can go tell Ellie the good news and start throwing together an impromptu wedding. Maddie laughs in pure delight.
One year to the day they first met, Dave and Ellie drive Jon, Sylvia and Maddie in their buckboard to Manti where the happy couple will be married. They sit through the endowment presentation. Jon carries Maddie from room to room. The incredible beauty of the blue and white Terrestrial Room make them both catch their breath (Can't blame them, it's my favorite room too!). At last they are married, kneeling across the alter in one of the sealing rooms. It is a very special day for both.
The newlyweds, along with wheelchair and luggage, are dropped off at the train depot where they plan to spend their honeymoon in Salt Lake City. Maddie laughs at being Mrs. Jonathon Brandt.

Chapter 9      Home is Where the Heart Leads

Poor Glen Hansen. He goes out of town for a few days and returns to find his only daughter eloped! As related by Ellie to Jon and Maddie upon their return, Glen and Sylvia got into a big fight. Syliva even moved in with Ellie for a few days. Just like in Fiddler on the Roof, Glen has declared his daughter dead to him. No one is to speak her name.
Lucky for Jon and Maddie, they're too blissfully happy to care. They set up housekeeping, go shopping in town for all the things they need for their new home. Jon takes Maddie to church where her parents never acknowledge them but the rest of the congregation shares their joy. When the annual harvest ball arrives, Jon insists they go, even if Maddie can't dance, she can still socialize and enjoy the evening. They go and have a good time. Jon begins Maddie's therapy, exercising her legs and she begins to believe she might walk one day. Maddie starts helping Jon treat his patients and discovers she a natural at nursing.
One winter day, Jon is working her legs but Maddie isn't feeling well today. It doesn't take long for Jon to deduce Maddie is pregnant. Several days later, Maddie discovers she can voluntarily move one of her legs.

Chapter 10      Clouds of Pride

The new year arrives. Glen continues to shun his daughter. Jon and Maddie plant a garden and by the time the seeds (and weeds) are sprouting, Maddie is able to crawl on her hands and knees along the rows, despite her growing belly. One day, Ellie comes over to visit. Maddie declares she can't stand it any longer. She must show Ellie her latest physical therapy accomplishment. She pulls herself up, out of her wheelchair to a standing position and even takes a few steps before she has to sit down again. Ellie weeps along with the happy couple. It's a miracle!
Maddie is eight months along when a telegram from Boston is delivered to the house. It's from Sara. Father is dying. Maddie and Jon start packing for the trip. Ellie can't come but sends her blessing. Jon must be pretty strong because he has no problem carrying his pregnant wife on board the train.
The trip is tense as Jon agonizes over his father dying before he has a chance to say goodbye and mend their differences, as his mother wished. His worst fears are confirmed when they arrive at the Boston house and Sara tells them they just missed Phillip's passing by one hour. Jon can't believe it.
Sara has a beau, Harrison Hartford, who is among the many mourners here to offer their condolences. Alone, upstairs in their guest room, Jon expresses his frustration to Maddie, his disappointment over not getting here in time to make peace with his exasperating father. Maddie comforts him. It's hard to love and let go of prideful men. They can name two in their lives.

Chapter 11      Pride Reciprocated

Maddie helps Sara make arrangements for the funeral. The two women have already become fast friends; as close as sisters. Jon is angry Sara has kept her engagement to Harrison dragging on for so many years because she felt her duty in caring for her father came first. Sara shows Jon their father's office desk and chair where he spent the last months of his life sitting, resting, reading and spending hours just staring at the two prominently displayed photographs of his son and daughter. Their mother kept journals which Sara (and she suspects her father) read. There is no doubt their parents loved them both very much. Jon takes some comfort in that.
Jon and Sara meet with the family solicitor. Phillip Brandt left them a nice pile of money and assets to be divided equally between them. The rest is to be donated to charities and hospitals. Jon tells Maddie to go ahead and go clothes shopping with Sara for something appropriate for the funeral. They can afford it. Maddie and Sara enjoy their outing.
The funeral brings some closure. While cleaning out their father's office, Sara discovers a letter, addressed to Jon from their father who humbly admits how proud he is of his son and hopes he'll return from Utah one day for a visit so they can mend their dysfunctional relationship. Jon is a little freaked out realizing his father wasn't the narcissist he believed him to be. At Maddie's suggestion, Jon takes a long walk and just talks to his deceased father, as if he were alive and by his side, listening. Jon cries and finds some healing.

Chapter 12      The Veil

Harrison takes Jon aside to formally request the family's permission to marry Sara. He is very stiff and sober as he adds he'd like to purchase the family home so Sara won't have to be uprooted. Also, he'd like for them to be married next week. It is to be a quiet affair with only a few guests. Jon agrees to everything and hopes Sara knows what's she's doing because this guy seems like an overprotective jerk to him.
Maddie throws herself into the wedding plans as the bond between her and Sara grows even deeper. With Sara looking deliriously happy, she and Harrison are married in the front parlor of the family home. Jon and Maddie house sit while they go off on their honeymoon.
It's not long after their return when Maddie goes into labor. Jon and Sara deliver the baby themselves. It's a girl! Jon is overcome with emotion at this circle of life for he feels his father's presence and knows he's finally made his peace. They name the baby Elizabeth.
Two weeks later, Jon and Maddie say their farewells and board the train west. As they step off in Utah, it seems the whole town is there to witness Maddie descend the steps of the train, all by herself, and take a seat on a nearby bench. That's right folks, she can walk.
A little late picking them up, Dave and Ellie are delighted to see them; especially the new baby. They drop the couple off at their house where a hot dinner has been laid on the table, waiting for them, which explains their tardiness. Jon and Maddie are grateful to have such good friends. As soon as they've finished eating,  they impulsively decide to surprise Maddie's parents with a visit. They need to meet their new granddaughter and Maddie can walk for them.
Maddie and Jon are standing at the threshold when Sylvia answers the door and nearly goes into shock at the sight of them. Glen enters and, before he can start yelling, Maddie walks over to her father and places the baby in his arms. She's in the middle of a little speech about how Jon is the best thing that ever happened to her and how much they both love and respect Glen when he hands the baby back, turns and exits the room. Awkward.
Sylvia invites them to sit down so they can tell her everything that's happened over the last few months. She is completely accepting and delighted to be a grandmother.

Chapter 13       Dancing with the Doctor

No one can deny it, Jon is the community doctor and he is very good at it. So many people come to see him that their kitchen and parlor have become unofficial waiting and examining rooms. Keeping house and cooking is getting difficult. Maddie suggests they use some of their new inheritance windfall to add a clinical wing onto their home. Jon is about to protest he was planning to use the money to purchase land so he could live his dream of becoming a gentleman farmer but quickly realizes Maddie is right.
A few days later, in an amazing display of burying the hatchet, Maddie's parents send over the piano for Maddie who is very glad to have it. She played duets with Sara in Boston and loved it but now, back in Utah, Jon could tell she missed her music.
Another day, while Jon is working alone in Dave's fields, helping out, an even more amazing event occurs. Glen interrupts Jon so they can have a real, manful, heart to heart talk. 
Glen explains how hard it was crossing the plains in a handcart company as a young boy and losing every member of his family except his father. While he knew the church was true, after his father died, Glen was getting weary of losing everyone he cared about. A young man at this point, marrying Sylvia was the best thing that ever happened to him and while Maddie's pregnancy and birth were difficult and they couldn't have any more children, Maddie was his pride and joy. Until she had her accident. That was when Glen convinced himself if he didn't "helicopter parent" he would ultimately lose Maddie. Now that he sees how happy she is with Jon, how far she's come, he's a changed and penitent man. 
Jon shares his own story about his troubled relationship with his father. Now that he's lived here for so many years, meeting and marrying Maddie especially, using his medical knowledge to help her walk, delivering his own baby, Jon has come to realize his place in the world is to be a doctor and his father knew it all along. Both men agree all is forgiven. 
Jon and Glen walk back to the house where Maddie gives them lunch. Glen leaves to fetch a special present for the baby. While he's gone, Jon and Maddie acknowledge this miracle in their lives. The present is a cradle that Glen made himself. Sylvia is also here to help bring it into the house.
Everything comes full circle at the harvest ball where Maddie dances with her father while Jon holds baby Lizzie in his lap. Then Jon gets his turn. Plans are underway for the new addition to the house. Jon thinks they might need a few extra rooms to accommodate the large family he plans to have. Maddie just laughs while Jon declares life is perfect.
And Jon and Maddie lived happily ever after.

The End

Tuesday, June 14, 2016

A Star in Winter





Book Series: Stand Alone Title 
Publishing Date: 2000
Author: Anita Stansfield
Publisher: Covenant Communications, Inc.
Category: LDS Contemporaray Romance
Point of View: Third Person Limited: Shayne and Helen
Chapter Count: 9
Page Count: 179

For Cindy, Kim, Dianne, LaRene, & Deanna

Happy Birthday!

Prologue        
Provo, Utah

Shayne Brynner is not happy. Thanks to his high maintenance wife and her credit card debt, he had no choice but to sell their home. Apartment hunting is the next step. Margie blames it all on him and is refusing to take any responsibility. Shayne worries about their two children and how this upcoming transition will affect them. Reclining in her La-Z-Boy, Margie accuses Shayne of being cruel and insensitive before turning back to the TV. Shayne just sighs, not wanting to admit how big a doormat he is.

Chapter 1
Meet Miss Helen Starkey. She teaches third grade and is very single but she LOVES her job. (Teaching in Utah? Just wait a few years, Miss Starkey!) During silent reading time, Helen takes this opportunity to study her (overcrowded, underfunded) class. One of her little students, Scotty Brynner, has been showing signs of social and academic decline. Trouble at home, most likely. Helen can't help but be concerned and makes a mental note to call his parents (again) for more information so she can help. She's already aware that Scotty's family are all members of the state's predominant religion. Helen is also a member. Whatever happened in Scotty's life to bring about this sudden withdrawal can't be good. (While we can't believe Helen only has ONE such student in her classroom.)
Lunchtime! Helen's best friend at work is Carla: happily married with three kids and fellow third grade teacher from across the hall for the last five years. The two women get together often outside work to exchange recipes and hang out. Hard to believe their biggest classroom management problems in this public elementary school are chewing gum and rubber bands. (Teachers have such posh jobs!) Helen doesn't mind being called "Miss Star" subsequently making it the theme of her classroom with stars everywhere, including a "Star of the Week" bulletin board but would love to toss the "Miss" title. Helen is pleasingly plump with long, curly brown hair. She dated in high school and in college where she received quite a few marriage proposals, but none of them felt right, so she turned them all down. (Really, Helen?) She is now a successful, independent career woman who owns her own home near the school where she teaches. She also has a cat.
Scotty is not in school the following day. Fed up with all the unreturned phone calls and notes home, Helen decides to take the situation into her own hands by tracking down Scotty's address and finds herself knocking on the door of a run down apartment complex.
The TV is on. The kids are alone. After reassuring Scotty it's okay to let a trusted adult, like a teacher, (Helen also plays Sunday school teacher here, reminding Scotty his recent baptism and confirmation should also concur) into the apartment, she is finally admitted. Scotty doesn't say much, but his little sister, Tamara, a first-grader, is more than happy to report to Miss Star since the babysitter never showed, they've been home alone ALL DAY, watching TV and eating all the junk food. Because of health issues, Mommy went to live with Grandma and they had to move here. Daddy's still at work. Helen investigates the kitchen to find all the cupboards near empty along with the fridge.
While these obvious conditions of child neglect would prompt any responsible adult to inform social services, Helen isn't that kind of woman. This family has obviously fallen on hard times. After going over Scotty's homework and missed assignments with him, Helen steps into the kitchen and (miraculously) finds all the ingredients to whip up a Shepherd's Pie casserole. Unsure about trying a new dish, Helen tells the kids if they close their eyes and take at least three bites, it won't be so bad. She bribes them with the promise of cookies tomorrow if they obey. They do it.
Mr. Bryner comes home, surprised to find a stranger, (his son's teacher no less) babysitting his kids and serving them a hot meal. Introductions are made, the kids are sent into the other room to play so the two grown ups can discuss the situation.
Mr. Bryner is a very lucky man. After giving Helen a very brief run down of the family living situation, Helen tells him she is more than happy to take on the extra responsibility of taking the children every day after school, bringing them here to the apartment and having dinner ready when he gets home. She WANTS to help and refuses to take any money. (This woman is nuts.)
Helen enters her dark, empty house with only the cat to greet her; already looking forward to tomorrow as she plans to bake cookies and play house as a surrogate mother to two adorable children who desperately need her. Who cares about Shayne Bryner?

                                                          Hamburger Pie (better known as Shepherd's Pie)

                                    Brown 1 lb ground beef (drain)
                                    add the following to taste:
                                                       salt and pepper
                                                       minced onion
                                                       garlic powder
                                                       dried parsley
                                                       Worcestershire sauce (about 1/2 tsp)

                                Add: one can green beans (use frozen green beans instead, along with freshly chopped and cooked carrots-cook/drain the frozen green beans and carrots first before adding)
                                          two 8-oz. cans tomato sauce

                               Spread in (9x13 Pyrex) casserole dish and spread hot mashed potatoes on top (leftover mashed potatoes from a previous meal works just as well)
                                              Sprinkle with shredded cheese 
                                              Bake at 350 degrees until cheese is melted
                                              "Close your eyes and take three bites!"
                (Author neglects to include bake time. We found 30-40 min to be sufficient. A favorite at our house, we recommend eating this with your eyes open. Enjoy!)


Chapter 2

Over lunch in the teacher's lounge, Carla and Helen speculate Shayne's wife must have some kind of cancer which explains why they are separated and so deep in debt. How sad. Carla tries to get Helen to admit feelings of attraction for Shayne but Helen doesn't want to go there. She'd rather focus on the kids and their needs and playing good Samaritan. This is temporary and besides, he's MARRIED!
That night, Shayne appreciates coming home to find children fed and homework completed. Helen offers to start doing the grocery shopping, if he'll compensate her.
Next day, Helen enjoys taking the kids with her to the store. Tonight's menu is chicken enchiladas. The kids hope there's no "icky green things" in it. Helen promises there isn't and they help her prepare the meal.
With the weekend off, Helen teaches her primary class and misses not having a family of her own to cook and care for and hang out with over the long two days. She is glad to return to her duties on Monday.
Helen discovers the apartment is two bedroom. Scotty and Tamara have their own rooms while Shayne sleeps on the hide-a-bed couch in the front room. She spends the week doing her own and the family's laundry at the laundromat, cleaning and organizing the kitchen, then making a chore chart for the kids so they can start helping out. For the most part, Scotty and Tamara are well behaved, polite children who are easy to tend. Helen adores them already and, for the kids, the feeling is mutual. Their mommy never paid this much attention to them, except to tell them to be quiet and watch TV until she could leave to go shopping. They like Helen. She's fun. She even helps them prepare a family home evening lesson the following Monday.
Tuesday is Halloween. When Shayne gets home, Helen has the kids all ready to go out trick or treating then she goes home to pass out candy, alone.
As November passes, Helen takes the kids on various outings to museums, the fire station and the library. She feels sorry for their sick mother whose health issues prevented her from spending quality time with these two special children.
Just before Thanksgiving break, Margie actually calls the apartment. She is terse and rather put out that a strange woman answered and that Shayne's not home from work yet. The kids take turns talking to their mother but the conversation is very one-sided as Margie does all the talking while the kids just grunt and nod. When Shayne gets home, he calls his wife back. Again, the conversation is tense and one sided as it becomes obvious this woman has no interest in being part of this family and, no, she's not coming to spend Thanksgiving.
After the table is cleared and the kids sent into the other room to play a board game, Helen asks Shayne for more information about his wife's health but he clams up. They'll be fine this weekend. Helen deserves some time off anyway.
Unable to fly home to Idaho for the holiday, (not on a Utah teacher's salary) Helen spends Thanksgiving with a family in her ward. Shayne phones early on Black Friday morning. (No one acknowledges it's Black Friday, either.) An emergency at work has come up and he's desperate for a sitter today and maybe tomorrow. Lonely Helen is only too happy to take the kids. He drops them off at Helen's where it'll be easier to feed them breakfast and entertain them. She fixes chicken enchiladas again that night. On Saturday, Helen takes them to one of the local malls (that'll be either University or Provo Towne Center) so they can see the Christmas decorations. The kids get a little hyper but Helen keeps them under control. Tamara comments what a good "mom" Helen is, so different from their own mom. Shayne is the only character with a cell phone (this is the year 2000 after all) while Helen has a landline and there's a message on her machine when they get home. Shayne regrets he'll be late picking up the kids tonight. The kids are asleep by the time he arrives and we finally learn what his occupation is-industrial construction worker, possibly plumbing, as the building they're working on had a pipe burst and flooding. He carries his sleepy children out to the car while Helen watches with obvious longing.

                                                  Children Friendly Chicken Enchiladas

1 can cream of chicken soup
1 can milk
1 8oz carton sour cream
(For extra color and flavor, I added 1 can Ro-Tel MILD diced tomatoes and green chilies. No heat, I promise! And once it's mixed in, you can't even see the "icky" green chilies)
12 flour tortillas (six inch fajita tortillas work great)
Cooked chunks of chicken (about one-and-a-half cups)
Sliced black olives (one 2.25 oz can, drained)
Shredded cheddar cheese

Mix soup, milk, and sour cream. Spread a little soup mixture on bottom of 9 x 13 inch metal pan (I spray the pan with cooking spray first)
Spread some soup mixture down center of each tortilla. Add chicken, olives and cheese. Roll tortillas and place in pan.

(Here's my method for rolling enchiladas: in a small frying pan, coated with a little cooking spray, warm one tortilla, place on prep board, spread mixture down center, bring both sides up and fold over each other leaving the ends open. If mixture escapes, just push it back in. Place in pan and rotate until seam side is face down. Repeat until all 12 tortillas are prepared. You should be able to fit 8 across the top of pan with remaining 4 in two perpendicular rows.)

Spread remaining mixture over top (along with remaining olives) and then shredded cheese
Bake at 375 degrees until hot
"No need to pick out the icky green stuff."

(Again, author fails to give us a bake time. Since oven temps vary, 30-45 min should be sufficient)

Chapter 3

Shayne's POV-after tucking his kids into their beds, he sobs in the shower (he gets so lonely, he could die) and goes to bed. Too tired to kneel, he says his nightly prayer in his mind. If nothing else, he's most grateful for Helen Starkey.
As another two weeks pass, Shayne's dream of Margie returning a changed woman ready to be part of a family again, is fading fast. Although Margie says she's planning on coming for Christmas, Shayne is doubtful. Over Helen's meat ring (Apparently, if you bake it in a round pan, forming a hole in the middle of the meat, it won't dry out.) Shayne agrees he should come after school for that overdue parent-teacher conference, an appropriate setting where they can really talk.
Three days later, he's standing on the threshold of Helen's classroom, smirking at all the star paraphernalia and artwork. Helen sends the kids across the hall to Carla's classroom and they finally get down to business.
Here's Shayne's sad story: His wife was born with a heart condition and while doctors assured her she could lead a normal, healthy, productive life, her parents indulged her. He enjoyed dating and courting Margie but after their not-in-the-temple wedding, for reasons even he never understood, (Really, Shayne? You never mentioned serving a mission, that's kinda important too!) Margie became a changed woman after the honeymoon. She quit school, her job and turned into a demanding, petulant witch, who always played the heart condition card to get out of doing any cooking or housework. Shayne hoped having kids might transform Margie into a Molly Mormon, but she was just never interested in being a mom. Her only talents appeared to be maxing out credit cards at the mall and going binge shopping with her friends to cope with her debilitating health issues. Her idea of cooking was bringing home fast food. Since Shayne made enough at his job to provide for his family, he continued to let Margie walk all over him and spend all his money, but as the years passed, Shayne began to feel trapped in this dysfunctional marriage. When the credit card debt became so bad they had to declare bankruptcy and sell the house, Margie left him.
Helen wonders aloud if maybe Shayne should be telling all this to a family counselor. Shayne tells her his parents are currently serving a mission and he doesn't want them to worry. He's never been close to his siblings who all live outside the state. He doesn't have anyone else. His plan is to get all their debt paid off in a year, then maybe, just maybe, Margie will come back to him and they can be a family again. In the meantime, Shayne hopes he and Helen can be friends. Flattered, Helen says she'll keep praying for them. Scotty and Tamara are good kids, resilient, and seem to be handling it fine.
Okay, good chat.
Carla can't wait to hear all the juicy details. Helen reminds her Shayne is still a married man but both agree Margie is acting like a baby. Shayne and his children definitely deserve better.

                                                               Meat Ring--Not Loaf

1 1/2 lbs. ground beef
3/4 cup oatmeal or cracker crumbs (I prefer bread crumbs or two slices of bread torn into small pieces)
1/4 cup finely chopped onion
1 1/2 teaspoon salt
1/4 teaspoon pepper
1 beaten egg
3/4 cup milk
(I also added 1 8oz can tomato sauce, 1/4 tsp dried sage, 1/8 tsp garlic powder and 1/4 tsp dry mustard)

Mix all together and mold into round pan, leaving a hole in the center.
(What kind of round pan? I seriously doubt anyone could cram that much hamburger into a round cake pan and make it work. Best stick to traditional meat loaf)

Cover with sauce and bake 1 hour at 350 degrees
Sauce: 1/3 cup ketchup
            2 tablespoons brown sugar
            1 tablespoon (prepared) mustard


Chapter 4

Over bacon-potato soup, talk turns to the excitement of Christmas. Helen noticed boxes in Tamara's room marked "Christmas" and offers to decorate the apartment with the kids tomorrow. For Helen, the holidays are one of worst times of the year to be single. Even when she goes home to Idaho, her married siblings and their children take precedence and she always feels left out but now that she has Scotty and Tamara in her life, it's the most wonderful time of the year for Helen.
She takes the children shopping so they can buy inexpensive presents for both their parents. Back at the apartment, they're right in the middle of baking and decorating cut-out Christmas cookies when the phone rings. It's Margie who found out Helen's name, thanks to her children who won't shut up about how wonderful she is. Hearing that, Helen wastes no time putting the children on.
Tamara becomes very upset when she learns Mommy isn't coming to spend Christmas with them after all. She screams that she hates Margie, throws down the phone and runs to her room. Scotty follows her and, after hanging up the phone, Helen does her best to comfort a still sobbing Tamara and sullen Scotty, telling them not to take it personally which helps them feel better. All are crying when Shayne enters the bedroom and learns about the devastating phone call. Helen preaches: God still loves them and they should all remember that Jesus is the reason for the season. Shayne reminds the kids Aunt Libby is still planning to come spend Christmas with them. The kids insist Miss Star join them.
It is decided Helen will come over for dinner at the Brynner's apartment on Christmas Eve (Aunt Libby will be doing the babysitting and cooking during the break) and she will host them at her house on Christmas Day which will include dinner and more gift exchange. Shayne thinks to himself what an amazing woman Helen is. Too bad he's married. Everyone can't wait to see Aunt Libby again. Helen's parents are also planning to visit sometime during the break and deliver gifts as well.
Great-Aunt Libby Brynner (Shayne's father's sister) turns out to be an older, never married, mid-single adult in her mid-fifties with blonde highlights covering the gray. She is tall, thin and bursting with youthful energy. She served not one, but THREE missions. We never learn what her occupation is but her satisfying and fulfilling career has allowed her the means to travel and indulge in eccentric activities. She enjoys serving others and learning new things which she then shares with everyone she meets. She loves spending time with her family, traveling often to visit her many nieces and nephews. Her life is rich and full, despite never experiencing temple marriage or bearing children, she's the happiest person Helen's ever met (and she's not fooling anybody).
Helen returns to her empty, lonely house, still in awe of this Sheri Dew and Mary Ellen Edmunds rolled into one amazing woman. She falls asleep with visions of living the Aunt Libby dream dancing in her head. Independent, incredibly happy, giving and serving to the very end. Who needs marriage? Who needs men?! From this moment on, Helen is not going to let her single status define her!
At 6:30am, Helen, still in her pajamas, returns to the apartment just in time to open and exchange presents with her new adopted family, also still in pajamas, even the grown ups. They have family prayer and Shayne wants everyone to name something they're grateful for before opening their first gift. Helen is impressed. She loves all her gifts: a new journal, a sweater and skirt set, a gift certificate to a kitchen store at the mall and a book. She is touched at all the trouble they went to.
Back at her house, the Brynner family arrives later that afternoon to open their own simple gifts Helen has for them. A scrapbook kit for the children, a gift set of (smelly) bath items for Libby and Helen made a wooden recipe box for Shayne with all her favorite recipes printed on cards inside. They gather at the table to eat ham and scalloped potatoes and it's a wonderful Christmas, probably the best of Helen's life.
Before they say goodbye, Helen tells Libby how much her example means to her. Libby's response is full of hope and enthusiasm. Even though she has no husband now, Libby knows if she stays faithful and works hard serving others all her life, she'll be blessed in the next with the opportunity to marry some wonderful man who was probably killed in one of the great wars and share every blessing of eternity with him. (Oh, Libby, you've been drinking the Kool-Aid, haven't you?)

                                                          Bacon-Potato Soup

1 package sliced bacon, cut into small pieces (author doesn't say how many this feeds and that's a LOT of bacon, so I'd half this recipe)
8-10 medium potatoes, peeled and cut into small pieces
2 cups cheese, shredded
Chopped onion, salt and pepper to taste

Fry bacon pieces until crisp. Drain grease (remove bacon) and set aside.  (I'd fry onions along with the bacon and boil potatoes in separate pan to add later) Cook potatoes and onions in enough water to cover, in the same pan so the bacon flavor cooks into the broth. When potatoes are tender, add thickening, cheese, bacon, salt and pepper. (I doubt a frying pan is big enough for all these ingredients. I'd use a stock pot.)

Thickening: 1/2 cup flour and 1 cup water

Mix and add slowly while stirring.
If you want the soup thicker, add more.

Chapter 5

On the 27th, Helen arrives at the Brynners' to take over babysitting (they just finished dropping off Aunt Libby at the airport) so Shayne can get to work. The kids went next door to play. Helen enters the apartment to find Shayne very distraught and upset. He's just been served divorce papers and has no idea how he's going to tell the kids. Helen listens as he makes a long speech about how hard he tried to keep this marriage from falling apart, to no avail. She tells him not to be so hard on himself.
Helen takes the kids to meet Carla at a pizza place (Peter Piper Pizza franchise no longer in Utah) where Helen brings her up to speed on the latest in the Brynner family breakdown and her possible future boyfriend/fiancé (Shut up, Carla. He's STILL MARRIED!). Helen almost admits aloud her growing romantic attraction for Shayne before stopping herself. Carla just smirks, knowingly.
Next day, after Shayne drops off the kids at Helen's for the day, Helen's parents arrive bearing gifts for all, including Scotty and Tamara. Helen appreciates the new afghan her mother made her along with small, simple gifts like new kitchen towels, bubble bath and a candle.
When Shayne comes to pick up the kids, he's invited to stay for dinner. Porcupine meatballs, yum! Everyone gets along fine, Shayne spends a lot of time talking with Helen's parents, in fact! After the Brynner family leaves, Helen's mother enters the kitchen for a little mother-daughter chat about this growing relationship, so obvious to everyone except Helen and Shayne. Helen repeats her speech: he's still married, the divorce isn't final yet, he's younger than her (but not by much) and while he's a very nice man, kind, crazy about his kids, that doesn't necessarily mean he's also crazy about her. He's given her no reason to think otherwise. Helen doubts his interest in someone like her: she's slightly overweight, single, financially independent, content to live alone (after meeting her new idol, Aunt Libby, Helen is beginning to think she never wants to get married anyway!). She also doubts his interest in her doesn't go beyond her already being his full time cook and nanny.
Helen's mom suggests Helen rent a copy of The Sound of Music to help put her confused feelings into perspective. (I'd tell Mom to go climb a mountain.)
The following evening, Shayne stays at his place to go over paperwork so Helen takes this opportunity to throw a movie party with the kids. They watch the musical and Helen falls asleep that night realizing if the opportunity ever did come to marry, she would be wise to follow her heart and take it. Sorry Aunt Libby.

                                                             Porcupine Meatballs

1 1/2 lbs ground beef
1/2 cup uncooked rice
1 tsp salt
1/2 tsp pepper
1 Tbsp dry minced onion
1 can tomato soup mixed with 1 can water

Mix first five ingredients and mold into meatballs. Drop into soup. Cover and simmer for about an hour, or until rice is tender.

Sorry, Anita, but I like my own mother's recipe (the one I grew up on) better:
1 lb ground beef
1 tsp dry mustard
1 tsp salt
1/2 onion, chopped fine
1 1/4 cups dry bread crumbs
1/3 cup uncooked rice
1/2 cup milk
1 egg
3 Tbsp shortening
1 can tomato soup
1/2 can water

Mix meat, onion, dry mustard, salt, bread crumbs, rice, milk and egg in bowl-use hands or spoon until all ingredients are well combined.
Shape mixture into balls (about 1 1/2 inches in size) and fry on medium-low heat with shortening in large frying pan, turning frequently, until brown and still moist. Remove from heat, place in casserole (1 1/2 quarts) cover with tomato soup and water.
Cover and bake at 350° about 45 min.

Chapter 6

Shayne phones to thank Helen for all her help and support. Helen thinks maybe he's asking her out, but the real reason he'd like to invite Helen to spend New Years Eve is because he wants her there at the apartment for moral support while he drops the bomb about the divorce to his kids. Helen suggests they move the party to her house. More room to absorb the fallout.
When the family arrives, Helen has her mother's famous fruitcake baking in the oven. It smells so good, Shayne can't believe it won't be dry and sickly sweet. They all sit to bless the food, a baked potato bar, as prepared by Helen. Shayne brought ice cream and toppings for dessert.
Before the children leave the table, Shayne exchanges a glance with Helen and plunges in with the news to his son and daughter that Mommy is not going to live with them anymore. Ever. The kids get weepy. Shayne takes them both in his arms while Helen feels like the awkward third wheel until Shayne gives her a reassuring smile over their heads.
The party continues with banana splits, popcorn, homemade root beer and warm fruitcake which Shayne admits is better than anything he's ever tasted. They play card games with lots of laughter, joking and happy chatter.
Right in the middle of it all, Tamara asks Shayne if Helen is going to be their new mommy now? Awkward silence. Shayne answers, "Only if she wants to," making Helen feel even more put on the spot. She is understandably offended but says nothing until after the kids are in their pajamas and playing in the other room when Shayne comes into the kitchen to confront Helen, making a long speech about her attraction to him, which is okay, because he feels the same; she's the most incredible single woman he's ever met. They've been playing the co-parenting role for so many weeks now, the children love her and Helen's such an excellent cook and housekeeper, they might as well get together, maybe even get engaged. Never mind the ink's hardly dry on the divorce papers, he's ready to move on, just like her. Quite the presumptuous man, isn't he?
Instead of slapping his face, "Buy me dinner first, you moron!" Helen starts to cry, because she's falling in love with him too. Shayne takes her in his arms, kisses her forehead. Shayne is no longer in the friend zone.
When it's time to ring in the New Year, Shayne kisses her quickly on the lips, making it official. Tomorrow they'll come over for a big turkey dinner and can talk more about the future. As Helen watches Shayne carry his sleepy children out to the car, she wants to whoop and holler for joy.

                                                              Mother's Fruitcake

1 3/4 cups flour
1/4 tsp salt
1/2 tsp cinnamon
1/2 tsp cloves
1/2 cup shortening
1 tsp vanilla
1 cup sugar
1 egg
1/2 cup each raisins & chopped nuts
1/2 tsp soda dissolved in 1 cup hot applesauce
1 lb candied fruit

Cream together shortening, sugar, egg and vanilla. Add applesauce mixture. Mix together dry ingrediants and add, along with nuts & raisins, then add fruit.
Bake in loaf pan at 325° for one hour.

Chapter 7

Helen is having the happiest New Year's Day of her life as she exchanges looks of incredible romantic longing with Shayne. Not ready yet to shock her own family ward with a newly divorced man and his kids at her side, Helen attends her own ward so she can teach her primary class while the Brynner's do likewise but they share Sunday dinner at the apartment later that day.
Helen declares she's going to make a coffee cake, sans coffee, (You know, Word of Wisdom and all that!) and they'll have it with cocoa instead. Scotty exposes Shayne's habit of eating Helen's leftovers for breakfast! (Typical male.) Helen makes a mental note to put a stop to that once they're married. (Typical female.)
Helen stays for their nightly scripture study. (For a man who never served a mission or took out his own endowments, Shayne is awfully religious.)
After the kids are put to bed, Helen stays so they can talk. He wants to hear her life story. Turns out, Helen served a mission and, after graduation, felt prompted to come to Utah to begin her teaching career (Um, Idaho is just above Utah in education funding.) and she's been blissfully happy ever since. Until she met Shayne and his amazing children, that is. Now she's even MORE blissfully happy. Shayne has trouble believing she never had to fight off the entire elder's quorum of her single's ward one by one with their temple marriage proposals. He takes her in his arms and kisses her. Margie is a distant memory for him now.
With school back in session, Carla gets the whole story out of Helen in the teacher's lounge: they decided to skip dating and courtship and get engaged immediately. They haven't set a date yet but Carla is the first to know.
As the weeks pass, Helen continues to babysit and cook for the Brynner family. Except now, Shayne is taking her out on actual once-a-week dates with a babysitter for the kids. They spend hours just talking and planning their future. They read and study the scriptures together so Helen can safely assume they will marry in the temple. At the dinner table one night, Tamara asks them, straight out, if they're going to get married? Shayne can't answer that yet, not without Helen's consent. Helen blushes.
Later, as he's helping her with the dishes, Shayne asks for ideas so he can give her the perfect marriage proposal of her dreams. Helen likes balloons, bakery-style cupcakes, flowers and chocolates. Sticking the ring in one of the cupcakes would be cute and roses are her favorite flower. If he were to get down on one knee, she'd probably say yes. They laugh and kiss while Helen silently thanks God for sending a man into her life.

                                                                      Coffee Cake

1 cup pancake mix
1/3 cup sugar
1/3 cup milk
1 egg
1/4 cup butter, melted

Mix together and pour into greased eight-inch round pan. Mix ingredients for topping until crumbly. Sprinkle over top of batter and bake at 375° for 20 minutes.

Topping:
1/4 cup brown sugar
1/4 cup flour
1/4 tsp cinnamon
2 Tbsp melted butter
"Don't add any coffee! Eat with cocoa!!"

Chapter 8

Valentine's Day is traditionally the worst day of any single woman's life. Not so for Helen Starkey. Today will be a day to remember.
While her class works on their Valentine's Day cards before the class party, Scotty is called to the office. He returns carrying a large bakery box full of cupcakes to Miss Starkey (and her class) from his dad. The one in the very center has a gaudy plastic ring stuck in the fluffy pink frosting. Grinning with expectation, Helen makes a little show of putting on the ring while her class giggles.
Then Tamara enters with a large cluster of balloons, also from Shayne who is close behind. He enters with a bouquet of roses and a heart-shaped box of chocolates (Hope they're from See's!) for her. Next he gets down on one knee to open a real diamond engagement ring for Helen to accept. She does, of course, and her class cheers. They kiss and a few boys make noises of disgust while the girls sigh. Shayne is adorable. He's the perfect man who managed to propose to Helen exactly how she wanted.
Hearing all the commotion, Carla pops in and is equally happy for her friend and not at all shocked or surprised. Neither are we, Carla.
Shayne and kids are just walking in the door after school when the phone rings. Tamara answers and when she learns it's Margie, proceeds to give her mom all the details about daddy's marriage proposal and how happy she is that Helen is going to be their new mommy. Scotty talks to his mom next then, with some apprehension, Shayne takes the phone. With her usual bluntness, Margie comments how fast he's rebounding and hopes Helen won't divorce him after all his many faults are exposed. Happy Valentine's Day, Margie.
Shayne shares his feelings with Helen who assures him she still wants to go through with this. They're getting married on the first day of spring. Shayne will move his family into her house and offers to use the money he's been saving to help her finish off the basement.
A few days later, Helen is stirring a pot of chili when Shayne walks through the door to greet his future wife with a kiss. He teases her about slaving away all day in the kitchen. Helen counters this is the easiest recipe in the world and, besides, she has better things to do, like plan a wedding! They can't wait to get married. Scotty and Tamara come running into the kitchen, so glad that Daddy is home.

                                                                  Busy Mom Chili

Brown 1 lb ground beef with dried minced onion and garlic to taste. Drain grease and add the following:

1 28 oz can tomatoes with liquid
2 tsp celery salt
1 Tbsp chili powder
1 tsp sugar
1 tsp Worcestershire sauce
1 27 oz can kidney beans, drained
1 8 oz can tomato sauce

Simmer for one hour. See...easy!
(Um, is this prepared in the frying pan? You forgot to add the pot, Anita!

Not to worry. I have a MUCH better and even easier recipe for Crock-Pot Chili
1 lb ground beef
dash or two of salt
One can stewed tomatoes (Del Monte diced tomatoes, zesty chili style, is okay too)
One can chili or pinto beans
One can kidney beans
One can black beans (if desired)
1 8 oz can tomato sauce
1 package Lawry's brand chili seasoning (No heat, I promise!)

Brown ground beef (sprinkle salt while browning), drain, add to crock pot. Open and add all cans without draining any liquid, add Lawry's. Stir until well combined. Set Crock-Pot on "low" and leave for work. Simmer six to eight hours (or until Mom gets home from work!)
If desired, serve over Fritos corn chips, with lots of shredded cheese and a dollop of sour cream.
See...easy!

Chapter 9

The wedding is in two weeks and for Helen, everything is perfect. Almost TOO perfect. In fact, after another teacher at school expresses her doubts and concern over how fast they're moving, Helen realizes she too is beginning to have second thoughts about this wedding. Maybe she doesn't know Shayne as well as she thought. What if he's a secret wife-beater and that's why Margie divorced him? Maybe HE was one who suffered from impulse spending, that he's really a couch potato and his whole "World's Greatest Dad" was all an act and that behind closed doors, Scotty and Tamara are really miserable, neglected children who can't wait for Helen to fall into their trap because the minute the honeymoon is over, Shayne will quit his job and refuse to contribute. She'll be stuck teaching third grade in Utah for all eternity, forced to get a second job to support the family. The Horror!
Helen sits bolt upright in bed, breathing hard. She must talk to her fiancé right away!
That Friday afternoon after school, Helen has the kids at her house and is busy in the kitchen when Shayne gets off work a little earlier than usual. He's achy and feverish and exhausted. Forgetting all about her qualms, Helen puts on her nurse's hat and devotes the next twenty-four hours to caring for him: insisting Shayne sleep in her bed tonight, fixing him soup and jello and doing all she can to make him comfortable. That's when it hits her. Shayne Brynner is the genuine deal. He's the man God put on this earth for her to marry.
Helen fixes several batches of lemon bread to serve at the wedding reception. Her mother and Aunt Libby arrive the day before the wedding to help her get everything ready. Aunt Libby confesses to Helen how glad she is her nephew is getting remarried to a better, more deserving woman. She never liked Margie. No one in the family did. Their divorce wasn't a big surprise to anyone and everyone is so relieved now to see Shayne so happy.
Helen feels truly beautiful in her "slimming" wedding gown. Her mother and Aunt Libby fuss over her. The look on Shayne's face in the sealing room of the temple says it all. (Narration doesn't say if the kids were there too, so they could all be sealed as a family.) Carla and Helen's entire third grade class is there at the reception to share Helen's joy. Since Shayne's parents are still off in another country serving their mission, they couldn't make it, but Helen got to talk to them over the phone and can't wait to meet them in person. The cake is cut, the bouquet tossed. It's a perfect day.

                                                                Lemon Bread

1 lemon cake mix
1 3 oz instant lemon pudding
1/3 cup oil
2 eggs
1 cup water

Mix ingredients and pour into well-greased loaf pans. Bake at 350 for 35 to 40 minutes. Cool in pan, then top with glaze.

Glaze:
1/2 cup powdered sugar
4 Tbsp lemon juice

Epilogue
Seven Months Later

All of Helen's in-laws, including Aunt Libby, are at the airport waiting to welcome their return missionary parents. Helen is pregnant and couldn't be happier. Shayne's parents greet her like a member of the family. They can't thank her enough for falling in love with their son (and his children) and making him so happy (because they really couldn't stand Margie, either).
Helen plans to keep teaching. Because the schools in Utah are so good about working around these things, she'll take a leave of absence after the baby's born and return later to continue her satisfying and rewarding career as a third grade teacher. (Sure you will, Helen.)
You know, life just doesn't get any better than this. Group hug!

THE END